Blue Bench for Lovers

blue bench for romance
white leaves and lovers kissing
camel dropped a hump

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Chèvrefeuille skriver:

5 Nov 2015 kl. 05:00

Awesome haiku Birgitta, you have used the leap linking in very great way and with a touch of humor … very well done.

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1. B i r g i t t a skriver:
  
  5 Nov 2015 kl. 09:38
  
  Thanks a lot! I love the leap linking in haiku 🙂
  
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writersdream9 skriver:

5 Nov 2015 kl. 16:14

Your leap is fantastic. I had to think about it but I got it! I’m liking this form of Haiku!

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humbird skriver:

5 Nov 2015 kl. 22:21

I read first time ‘while’ instead of ‘white’. Witty!

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Bastet skriver:

6 Nov 2015 kl. 06:20

Nice … and made me smile! 🙂

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